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Tuesday, November 12, 2013

The Last Time





The Last Time

If I knew it would be the last time
I would be able to hear your voice
I would carefully take in each thought
in each of your words rejoice.

If I knew it would be the last time
I would be able to see your face
I would contemplate every inch of it
so its memory I could embrace.

If I knew it would be the last time
I could tell you that I cared
I'd say all the words I'd been saving
no loving words would be spared.

If I knew it would be the last time
to see you wave good-bye as you go
I'd be more aware of the moment
and stand longer in your glow.

I often depend on tomorrow
to do what I didn't do or say today
but sadly I don't always know
what life will bring my way.

I am not guaranteed a future
beyond this one short moment
to say I love you or I'm sorry
thank you or you're important.

There will always be a last time
that will arrive on a future day
I must live and love with eyes wide open
whether the time is near or far away.

Written for Poetry Jam, where the post is "The Last...."




22 comments:

  1. A beautiful 'last time' poem wich reminds us to 'live and love' now rather than later, to savor what we have and not to rely on tomorrow for better moments.

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  2. Beautiful Mary and such wisdom as well. Thanks for getting the prompt started.

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  3. so beautifully written.....the last two lines are all we need to be aware of to have no regrets......

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  4. So poignant, Mary, so beautiful, and so true.

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  5. Thoughtful reminder to treat each moment as the last, give it all of our best...~ Tender feelings here...~ Peaceful day to you, Mary xx

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  6. So beautiful and so sad at the same time. You really captured many emotions here.

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  7. Lovely sentiments... this stanza is so poignant
    I am not guaranteed a future
    beyond this one short moment
    to say I love you or I'm sorry
    thank you or you're important.
    beautifully written.

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  8. Yeah there is always a last time, can be bittersweet or not indeed

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  9. It is a gift not given to many to live life to the full, as if each day is the last day.

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  10. mmm def not some easy thoughts there....if only we knew when the end was here how we would prepare...and / or live our lives differently...the end can come at anytime....and if we lived life like it was...not in fear but in embracing every little moment as special....smiles.

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  11. This made me think of my father who is no longer with us. So much I'd wish I'd said or done before he died.

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  12. Beautifully written and full of vivid emotion.From the heart and so full of words of truth.

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  13. Very poignant, Mary......."I would stand longer in your glow". How beautiful.

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  14. so beautiful! A good reminder to live each moment to its fullest!

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  15. oh this is so beautiful. I love that you repeated...it's lovely and thought provoking and inspirational.

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  16. Yes, there is indeed always a last time. Nicely done!

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  17. We all trust that tomorrow will come. Yet life and death are unpredictable. So important to cherish each moment with those we love. I like how you expressed this Mary.

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  18. so beautifully expressed. No one knows the future and its best to be in the present.

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  19. Mary, beautifully written and expressed--It is so important to say those things and be in the present, not always easy to do--tomorrow seems to be my refrain, except for telling people that I love them, I do that every day :-)

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  20. so true there have been times that if i knew it was the last time....more attention might have been paid to that moment

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  21. I can so relate Mary…I wrote something and then went to link and realized Mr. Linkey was closed. I posted it anyway. I always read the challenge and then write before I read anyone's poems. Your's touched me….well done.

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