Raise a glass, make a toast, know I'm not far away. As you look for me out of the corner of your eye or find me in your dreams, picture me with a smile and happy, know that we will meet again.
Tuesday, November 26, 2013
To Live Life
To Live Life
Hands are for comforting,
for waving and shaking,
for brushing back hair
to wipe away a tear,
not for striking a blow.
Arms are for holding,
for protecting and embracing,
for holding someone tight in
the middle of the night,
not for shooting a foe.
Legs are for dancing,
for walking and skipping,
for jogging and running
and pumping swings high,
not for kicking below.
Mouths are for laughing,
for speaking, for singing,
for the telling of stories
on a dark winter night,
not for cursing a beau.
Hearts are for beating,
for caring and loving,
for being cherished along
the path of life,
not for breaking the flow.
Lives are for living,
for working and playing,
for dreaming and hoping
and enjoying each day,
not for destroying the glow.
Hands for comforting,
arms for holding,
legs for dancing
mouths for laughing
hearts for beating --
to live life fortissimo.
This is written for dVerse Open Link, where Bjorn is tending bar today! Also linked to Poetry Pantry Open Link.
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Very strong timeless message and reminder behind the simple words! We have the power to do good rather than be destructive or just passive. I like how the last stanza rounds up the whole poem.
ReplyDeletemmm truth...too often what we have been given is used in the wrong way...and hte wrong purposes beyond the one true one which is to bring love.
ReplyDeleteI just really enjoyed reading this, thanks
ReplyDeleteThis is just awesome.. I really love the flow, and for the sentiment... I would love to have this made into a song... If it would just be a truth... see you at the bar later.
ReplyDeleteWonderful sentiments beautifully penned, Mary.
ReplyDeleteso very true...and so sad if we used the good things we've been given in a bad way... yeah...def. use the arms to hold and legs to dance ..living life fortissimo...i like..... and i dance along...smiles
ReplyDeleteWonderful. Life as it is meant to be lived. Great message, Mary. And who are those ADORABLE children?
ReplyDeletewhat a precious gift life is to us .....and nothing could be said more beautifully than your lines Mary....so inspiring and full of heart...
ReplyDeletebeautifully said. I like the build up to each of the last lines of the stanzas; an the way you brought it together in the end. I had to look up "fortissimo" … it's a nice touch.
ReplyDeletelife is for working too? Take that out and I agree with you lol nice weave of life
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful Mary, thank you!
ReplyDeleteWell done Mary. Excellent read. >KB
ReplyDeleteSuch a great flow & a beautiful message. I enjoyed this, Mary.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Especially loved that second to last stanza. Glow should be treated as something precious.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful reminder of what life is all about. We were made for love, not hate. Peace, Linda
ReplyDeleteOh I absolutely love this! A very good message overall. Sounds like something to be printed out and handed to everybody! Well done...smiles...
ReplyDeleteFortissimo! When we know the tune and what everything is for, but still have lots of the concert of life in front of us. Wonderful. Good pic too.
ReplyDeletea very positive and uplifing piece. lovely.
ReplyDeleteThis has such a delightful flow. Marvelous piece, Mary.
ReplyDeleteamen. just amen.
ReplyDeletewonderful message...loved it...
ReplyDeleteThis is a delightful poem with a strong, deep and important message.
ReplyDeleteI think you need to climb up a mountain and tell it to the world! Especially our young people. Wonderful messages herel.
ReplyDeleteHow easily we forget. Well said.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful - even with the counterpoint of the negativity, this is a really positive, and inspiring poem. Lovely, Mary.
ReplyDeleteA gorgeous celebration of being human, and of being good stewards of ourselves. Loved this, Mary.
ReplyDeleteOne of the most beautiful poem that I read today - kudos!
ReplyDeleteYes...strong and important message! Wonderful piece...love that close!
ReplyDeleteOH what a Blessing of a poem...Beautifull Expressed. Just Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteIt's sad that truth can be manipulated. An even flow of words here Mary! Great write!
ReplyDeleteHank
So so true! And legs are especially for dancing! (Love that!) K.
ReplyDelete"Lives are for living,
ReplyDeletefor working and playing,
for dreaming and hoping
and enjoying each day,
not for destroying the glow."
Amen Mary
Mary, I love this so much--it is a beautiful mantra, one that more people should practice or at least have taped to their wall as a reminder--wonderful, wonderful words!
ReplyDeleteVery lovely piece. :-)
ReplyDeleteWhat an adorable picture for a poem that is so true, so good. I read it out loud to my boys.
ReplyDeleteSimply joyful Mary..can't help but leave you smiling..
ReplyDeleteWise words Mary. I like this. Glad I came across you at DVerse Poets x
ReplyDeleteInspiring, Mary. This would be lovely framed in schools, women's shelters, many places....as it builds so beautifully on that quote-often-turned-to-poster: Hands are not for hurting.
ReplyDeleteThis is refreshing and well written. I wish lots of people read it and take it in… Thanks for sharing it.
ReplyDeletesweet pic and sweet pen ~
ReplyDeleteWonderful rhythm and contrast between the positive and negative. Also, adorable picture. Altogether, very nice, Mary.
ReplyDeleteLovely thoughts on how to use our bodies to live a better life..and a gentle reminder of what not to do...
ReplyDeleteHere's my hand to you for this gem of a poem. Many thanks.
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
Oh to live loudly and truly speak through all the body parts..is a lovely way to be....
ReplyDeletesimply without any of those hateful things of armed body parts..instead of parts of love...
Making it all work together..as ONE...
I missed this one somehow Mary. Wonderful thoughts here.
ReplyDeletelife's for living and loving , hope everyone remembers and not keep forgetting. i like the message
ReplyDeletethis is really beautiful, speaks the truth and it made me smile. very positive poem, something we need to be reminded sometimess
ReplyDeleteThis is a great anti-violence poem. I hope it receives more views.
ReplyDeleteHow true , if whole world knows the best use of everything.
ReplyDeleteNice. Words of wisdom. Beautiful message. :-)
ReplyDelete-HA
happy sunday mary....smiles...still enjoyed this one...love the message in it....
ReplyDeleteLovely...these are words of wisdom, Mary! This beautifully reveals our biological capacity to connect. Splendid!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you set out this poem.
ReplyDeletesometimes we need to be reminded how good we were created; have a nice Sunday
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Beautiful, Mary. How to live a life. How to use our gifts in light and love....
ReplyDeleteA perfect symphony, Mary. I loved this! Just a beautiful reminder that life is more than deadlines. :)
ReplyDeleteunfortunately, these simple truths often elude us.
ReplyDeleteGood thinking
ReplyDeleteZQ
Your poems often explore the truth, something for which I have a great appreciation. Loved the last line.
ReplyDeletewell done, in words and form
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful Mary. Well done indeed.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Love to live on ff...but sometimes we need 'me' time on pp~ so wonderfully written poem about simple things...
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