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Thursday, November 21, 2013

Conversation


http://www.wikipaintings.org/en/berthe-morisot/conversation



Conversation 

I ask a question
you answer 
happy to share
your experience
your thoughts
your wisdom
then your silence
you’ve finished

I reflect on your words
question more
you add detail
elaborate
I invite you to explain
you answer
smile
silence again

you then beam
proudly
and  ask
is there anything else 
you’d like
to know?


This is shared with G-Man and has exactly 55 words.  Go and tell it to the G-Man!

25 comments:

  1. You have drawn quite a portrait through this conversation, Mary! The ending made me smile. All the more so as this person reminds me of someone I met quite recently. Very often people reveal more about themselves than they are aware.

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  2. At least there was an exchange of thought.
    Some conversations are oratories.
    Loved your conversational 55 Mary
    Always positive, always real...You Rock!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  3. haha nosey as can be at your 55 sea

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  4. smiles...its a comfortable place where the lives are laid open for inspection...look, hear, ask...whatever you want...i trust you with that....

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  5. Anything else? Yes!
    I'd like to know those things you don't want to tell me.
    Go ahead. Speak. I'll listen...

    You "do" Q & A well, Mary...and in 55, no less (or no more!)
    It is a true wonder, to "know" another via conversation, one of God's gifts.
    Maybe four legged animals also share ...a little bit? Hmmm. Have to research that.

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  6. Cool. I envy people who have the energy for this sort of exploration. Truly, I do. I am just So Tired!

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  7. I love conversations. Such a great way to interact when people are willing to share--and frustrating when they are too silent! Of course being comfortable with silence is a wonderful thing between two people who are close.

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  8. silence is not entertained....so conversation goes on.......a nice sketch... :)

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  9. I love the thought of allowing ourselves the vulnerability to be asked literally everything and anything...but there's only a handful of people on the planet that we could ever feel that comfort with. But once we do, wow...

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  10. Very coy! Lovely 55.

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  11. So few people really share what they think...so often it's more about what they think you want them to think...if that makes any sense? This is a cool conversation, Mary.

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  12. That seems like a pretty nice converstaion. :o) Have a good weekend Mary.

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  13. structure works quite well with this - a real sense of back and forth ~

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  14. Well for me that's a conversation ~ Silence should be comfortable & can be part of it ~

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  15. well, i think thats the most difficult thing to do, i ask you answer... nobody can do it :) well written :)

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  16. Such a sweet write. How I long for a conversation like that... :-)
    -HA

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  17. Back and forth, give and take, sometimes a break.

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  18. Sweet and to the point! :)

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  19. I love the easy flow of a conversation between equals. Not so good on the learning end.

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  20. The ability is listen is something we all must learn. I like how you create that feeling of how we all need to be aware of each other.

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  21. Great ekphrasis...or is it the other way around. Love the intimacy of poem and painting.

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  22. nice....this is how conversation should be...open and comfortable

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  23. I love having such conversations. Very nice, Mary.

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